ou have finally submitted your manuscript to a
journal of your choice. Now that the proverbial elephant has been pushed
through the door, a heavy load has been removed from your shoulders and
you are eagerly awaiting the elusive acceptance letter from the editor.
But beware; the elephant’s tail is going to get stuck more often than
not! It is incredibly rare for a manuscript to be accepted without
revision on first submission.
Manuscript Handling at the Journal Office
On submission of the manuscript, the editorial review
process begins with an initial reading by the Chief editor, looking at
the relevance and novelty of the manuscript and its conformity to the
journal guidelines, before either rejecting or considering it suitable
for journal review process. Once considered suitable, it is then
forwarded to reviewers or to one of the associate editors to assigns
reviewers, who are subject experts in a field related to submitted
manuscript. The reviewers report back within a given time frame with
their comments, both for the authors and confidential comments for the
editors. The editor then uses these reviews to make a decision on
suitability of the manuscript for publication in the journal. The
comments of the editors and the reviewers are then conveyed to the
corresponding author.
There are four primary types of editorial decisions
that are made: Acceptance, Minor revisions needed; Major revisions
required, and Rejection – with the first one being highly uncommon. Any
author worth his salt would have received most of these editorial
decisions in his writing career.
If revisions are required, the author is required to
resubmit the manuscript after modifying in light of the comments. The
editor would again go through it and in all probability forward it to
the same reviewers to assess whether their comments have been addressed
satisfactorily and seek their opinion about suitability of publication
of the revised manuscript. At any step, the editor and/or the reviewers
may return the manuscript with a request for further revisions. The
process continues till the modifications have been made to the
satisfaction of the reviewers and the editor. The acceptance of the
manuscript is then conveyed to the corresponding author.
Preparing the Response
There are slim chances that your manuscript may be
accepted without any changes. If this happens, you may count yourself
lucky, because such an editorial response is not easily forthcoming [1].
If only minor revisions have been suggested, it is
advisable to do so without making any fuss. You should then send the
revised manuscript back to the editor as soon as possible.
Request for major revisions, is the commonest
editorial decision made. This means that the current version of your
manuscript has been rejected, but would be reconsidered after the
suggested changes have been made. It may feel like a body blow even to
seasoned authors. But you must always remember that if major revisions
have been suggested, you are still in the game and have a good chance of
success. Moreover, the manuscript under evaluation is a product of your
hard work. You can not afford to let it go without ‘fighting’ it out
with all your might.
Once rejected, there is little you can do to get your
paper published in the same journal. You must revise your manuscript
according to the suggestions received and submit it to another suitable
journal for publication.
An editorial decision for changes usually indicates
that the Journal is interested in your article, which is good news [2].
In any other case, one must not be discouraged and you would be well
advised not to fret. Take a break, and then re-read the comments. One
should not take the reviewers comments personally. In most cases, the
reviewers are blinded to the authors’ identity and the place of study.
You must realize that they are only doing their job to the best of their
ability and that too on complimentary basis just for love of research.
Editors strive hard to make their journal better and this they can
achieve by helping you improve your manuscript. Even though the comments
may appear grave and direct; by and large they have been made in the
spirit of constructive criticism [3]. After the cooling-off period,
discuss the editorial decision with your co-authors and get to work on
it. As all authors are equally responsible for the paper, it is prudent
to get their observations and suggestions on the comments received and
approval on the changes to be made.
It is worthwhile for an author not to immediately
react to the comments of the reviewer with defensive reasoning. Try to
understand the reasons behind the comments, look at the issues with a
critical eye just like an ‘editor’ and not as an author. This will help
you appreciate the reviewer’s point of view and may even help you to
identify other factual or typographical errors which might have been
previously missed. After having ‘educated’ yourself regarding the
deficiencies in the manuscript you would find yourself in a better
condition to revise the manuscript and respond to the reviewers
comments.
Revising the Manuscript
Based on the reviewer’s comments, make the changes in
the manuscript as planned. It is prudent to adhere to the journal
guidelines while formatting the manuscript. Underlining or highlighting
the modifications in a different color will make them easily visible. If
the journal so accepts, the ‘track changes’ option of the software could
be used to highlight the revision done. All this will help to facilitate
the review. Do remember to also send a ‘clean’ (without track changes
and highlighting) copy. The referencing style and the in-text citation
must also be re-checked after revision.
Most of the Journals either use ‘US English’ or ‘UK
English" as their preferred choice of language; check the journal
guidelines and set your word processor accordingly. If there are major
grammatical mistakes the reviewers may want you to get the manuscript
vetted by a person who has reasonable expertise in ‘English language.
You may sometimes be asked to reduce the size of your manuscript.
Deletion and/or mergers of tables and/or figures is also requested by
the reviewers. Suggestions of inserting of bulleted lists may also
sometimes be given
As such these reviewer suggestions, especially those
which lead to reduced word-count of the manuscript, should ordinarily be
accepted. If the authors feel that suggested changes are not advisable,
the editors should be requested for reconsideration. Journals are
usually short of printing space and editors have to keep the final
layout in mind, and so chances are that the editor is unlikely to heed
to such requests. The other option of sending the unrevised manuscript
to a different journal is always available.
Authors may consider a complete rewrite of the
manuscript incorporating the suggestions available. But unless requested
to do so by the reviewers, it is likely to be considered a new
submission and the whole rigmarole and the emotional roller coaster ride
of manuscript submission process would have to be faced again. In any
case, treat the revision with same diligence as you had shown to the
original version. Do not abandon the revision and the subsequent
resubmission for long, as the chances of acceptance decreases with time
You may decide not to make any changes in the
manuscript and submit the same to some other journal. But here lies the
catch! There are chances that the manuscript may land up with the same
reviewer as before. In that situation the reviewer is unlikely to bestow
any kindness if his earlier issues have not been addressed to his
satisfaction. As such any inherent issues present in the paper would
have to be sorted out before the manuscript is finally accepted.
Responding to Comments
The response process is akin to be interviewed, you
would be required to defend your position and paper. Do not
underestimate the task. It might sometimes take a long time and a lot of
effort to address the issues
The revised manuscript should be accompanied by a
covering letter detailing point-wise modifications that have been made
in the manuscript. The journal guidelines should be adhered to in the
layout of the letter. There are three basic ‘tips’ or golden rules for
responding to reviewer’s comments. Answer politely, answer completely,
and answer with evidence [4]. It would be a good gesture to begin the
letter by thanking the reviewers for their effort and time spent. A
gratuitous approval in acknowledging the same is always appreciated by
the reviewers and editors alike. The information given should be clear
and concise. Do give raw data when asked for. The reviewer may want to
cross check your results or calculations.
The comments of the reviewers/editorial board should
be typed verbatim (ideally use copy-paste commands of the word
processor) and point-by-point response provided while giving sufficient
attention to details. If the comments are too many, they may be depicted
in a tabular form with comments on the left and your responses on the
right side. Try to identify the main concerns of the reviewers. Even if
the comments are in form of big paragraphs it is advisable to split them
into separate points and address them individually [1]. The changes done
in the revised manuscript need to be mentioned along with the place
where they have been made. The numbers of the page and the lines therein
may also be cited wherever possible.
It is suitable to use present tense or past perfect
tense in the covering letter, to intimate the changes made; for e.g." We
now add the following sentence…………/ we have added the following line
….."[2].
It is not always feasible for the Journal editor to
get two subject experts to review the manuscript within stipulated time.
So he/she may have to get the manuscript reviewed by general experts
only. On such occasions the comments from the reviewers may be
conflicting and sometimes even differ drastically; though such
occurrence is rare, it would be reasonable to go with one reviewer’s
comments, justifying your reason to do so.
It is also human nature to make mistakes. Reviewers
and even editors are known to make their share of errors in the review
process [3]. You might sometimes not be willing to accept the opinion of
the reviewers and are of the opinion that he/she is wrong. There is
always an option of ‘disagreeing’ with the reviewer on certain points or
comments. You would need to be thorough in your reply and give
well-supported reasons for your divergent views. You will be well
advised to watch your tone and tenor in your reply. Don’t try to
justify/ argue unnecessarily. After all you need the reviewer/s to only
yield to your point of view rather than become your ardent supporter.
You can always write to the editor imploring him to
change the decision. However deriding the reviewers and questioning
their judgment is a low yield strategy [5]. It is more in your interest
to give it another shot and get your work published rather than to
ignore it [6].
The Road Ahead
Even if your paper has been rejected, it is not the
end of the world. In a previous study [7], the top reasons for rejection
of articles submitted to Indian Pediatrics in one calender
year were ‘absence of a message’, ‘lack of originality’, ‘inadequate
methods’, ‘not relevant to journal’, ‘over-interpretation of results’,
‘unsatisfactory writing style’, ‘inaccurate/inconsistent/insufficient
data’, and ‘inappropriate statistical analysis’, in that order.
The rejection may not be a reflection of your manuscript. It happens,
that for stated or unstated reasons, the editors decided that your paper
was not what they wanted. It may just have been bad timings as the
journal might have just published or accepted a study similar to yours
[5]
A good paper would always get published in one or the
other journal more often than not. In fact, out of papers rejected by
Indian Pediatrics in the year 2002, 18% were detected to have been
subsequently published elsewhere, some even in journals with Impact
Factor higher than that of the rejecting journal [6].
The Essence of Response to Reviewers
One should consider the reviewers’ comments as free
expert advice on the shortcomings of the manuscript. You must take the
comments with all seriousness and respond to best of your ability. After
all; you, the editors and the reviewers all are on the same side and
would like to see a quality manuscript getting published.
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